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  1. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    While this is a marvel idea, I don't think livestream spriting will work on a forum this small. Just post your finished pieces.
  2. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    St. Christopher: Resize. Please. Magnify at x2/200%, it's big enough to edit yet small enough to fit here. Also, picture crits mostly work if you post an improvement alongside it to let the person see how your suggestions improve the sprite.
  3. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    An image to summarize my crit. Overall, the sprite itself is nice. Good choice of colour scheme, it's just the little things.
  4. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    Chaon: NEVER. And I mean NEVER save sprites as JPEG files. Use PNG to prevent it from graining.
  5. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    It's much easier to post an image instead. You've got some misplaced highlights and shadows here and there, especially on the cloud and the front foot. As for the eyes, the subject left eye has a bit more space towards the nose. I do like the shading on the beardcheek, though.
  6. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    @ Umbreon-dana: Nothing wrong with the blob, though the lighting seems to "spill". get rid of the highlights in the flatter areas. Now for mine. No reference whatsoever.
  7. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    Too bloody dithered. Either AA that or reduce it. The last one is the best, really. The colors aren't forcefully on a gradient.
  8. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    Actually, the dithering is fine. You just need to tone it down a bit, and add some AA.
  9. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    I would have to say that brown Arbokthing is nicely done. It's just the legs that don't match; get rid of the muscle definition. I'm not any good with in-depth stuff. Anyway, tweaked with the former two and added more VS faces. All for Pokemon Online as a trial sort of thing.
  10. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    Damn, how can I forget that? Fixed.
  11. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    While they are cute, the Togekiss baby(?) has distorted wings. Try scratching. The balloon is nice, but it's simple. Try adding some stitching on the wings and the head crest thing. Anyway, my turn. Flannery, this time.
  12. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    Well the anime rarely show fingernails, plus that's the style of the VS faces.
  13. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    The first one is blindingly neon, not to mention those awkward lines on the torso and there's too much black for that shade of blue. And there's something wrong with the outline on the wings. The second one is nice, but a bit of a nitpick; the outline on the mouth where the two Pokemon meet is...
  14. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    Superyoshi: A nitpick; it doesn't look like it has a neck, or any shadows under the chin. I do like the flame, though. It's really nice. apart from that, it's perfectly mediocre. Nothing bad, but nothing outstanding, either. As for Kirby, it's too light. Some contrast will do it wonders...
  15. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    The halo's fine. It gives the sense that the halo is thin and that it sort of vanishes from sight the further it went.
  16. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    Went on a visit on all the cchans, very disturbed. Though the character Anon is a great piece to do from an artist's point of view. It's sort of the dalek effect; you can't connect with it because it's not human to us so we fear it. It's fun to draw.
  17. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    Crit? Pure scratch.
  18. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    A scratch, save for Ho-oh which was a revamp.
  19. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    @ Colossal: Just a side comment but I've seen those Deoxys forms before(not sure where) and the sprites seem to be a big jump from your last post here.
  20. Valerunner

    The Spriter's Showcase!

    Ruffles on the robe. Make long triangles from the bottom.
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